Excerpt 5 this morning: Doom and Madness

From a story I'm writing for submission!

“Profit and doom. Doom and madness.” She thought she could smell the fumes, wafting up from an infinitely deep hole of acid. She thought she could taste the way they were coloring her mind. The first to go would be practicality. The animal instincts would go last.

Excerpt 6 today - from a Space Pirates story

From a project I'm working on for a friend; in the same setting as the Space Accountant stories.

And that was the last of the signals. There were times Lind and her partner paid buckets of cash for what they were about to do, and times they were paid in bucketloads; there were times they just used their sidearms and quick wit and no money crossed hands at all.


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Excerpt 7 today - from "Prisoners 6 & 23"

Prisoners 6 & 23 is an erotic, BD/SM serial I am pondering creating. It's set in the dark underbowels of Tír na Cali.




She started to lose her tentative hold on consciousness. "No!" she tried to shout, but all that came out was a tiny puff of air. She thought, maybe, the whiteness in front of her face fogged up, but that could have been her imagination.

She faded back into the nightmare, her feet pounding on the pavement but never getting away.

Quick Belfreja description

Bel is a lovely girl in her late teens.

Her face shape and hair color are most like this girl - http://www.flickr.com/photos/barbiesland/galleries/72157627139478514/#photo_4893086879

She's not a petite girl; she's not remotely heavy, but she's got Viking ancestry on both sides. Her shoulders are wide, and her chest is full (and perky).

Her hair style is rather like this - http://www.gallery.becomegorgeous.com/long_hairstyles/long_vintage_waves_hairstyle-4136.html

She's sporting a dress like this - http://lisafremontpages.blogspot.com/2010/07/diamonds-and-damesepisode-11-laura.html

She might be carrying a fedora, though no worries if it doesn't work in the picture.

SHe's probably not wearing it, because she's got ram horns (smaller than this - http://www.superstock.com/stock-photos-images/463-3115 - the best picture I can find for size/placement is this: http://tamara-hawk.deviantart.com/art/Maria-76412852

And she's smiling, looking off-screen.