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“This looks like an averted fight, to be honest.  What is going on here, children?”  House Monitor Libkazaari sounded amused but it hadn’t reached to her eyes.  She was studying them all, looking from one to another.

Darnio cleared his throat.  “We were just having a conversation with Saydrie he

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Date: 2015-12-17 04:47 am (UTC)
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Still reading avidly!

• as Saydrie ‸ a hand over
> This clause no verb.
‸ put, pressed

• hands all over each over.” she murmured in Enrie’s ear
→ each other,"
> Besides over/other, a comma instead of a period, because you're attaching the quote-attribution sentence at the end.


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