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aldersprigInterlude: Doug
by Lyn Thorne-Alder
“Your daughter…!”
Doug looked up from his book, feeling his Masked stubs of swings flaring out in response to his father’s obvious anger. “Niassa?”
Of course Niassa. He only had one child at the school at the moment – his second, which made two more than his father’d had here so far – and of his three children, only one of them was a daughter.
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by Lyn Thorne-Alder
“Your daughter…!”
Doug looked up from his book, feeling his Masked stubs of swings flaring out in response to his father’s obvious anger. “Niassa?”
Of course Niassa. He only had one child at the school at the moment – his second, which made two more than his father’d had here so far – and of his three children, only one of them was a daughter.
read on...
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Date: 2017-05-09 02:57 pm (UTC)Again, it's good to see Luke in a helpful, calm, mentoring role.
• Masked stubs of swings
-> wings
• He sat down in ^ second chair
^ the
• cut-crystal rocks glasses
-> rock
• one into the other.
-> others
> This one may be more style than grammar.
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Date: 2017-05-27 09:06 pm (UTC)And Luke and Doug are part of the furniture of the school :-D