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aldersprigThis was meant to be a comment fic like thus after this comment by Kelkyag, but it turned out a wee bit long. So... bonus ficlet?
After (Before) The Empire Falls, the Emperor Stands.
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The young son-of-the-Emperor (they were all sons of the Emperor, although their fathers were all several years dead) waited until two of his cousins were making an appropriate fuss and two more seemed to have decided to climb the bookshelves all the way to the top.
There were seven nursemaids for the lot of them, but, from the things the nurses said when they thought their young charges weren’t listening, there were more of them, the sons, then there had been in recent memory — “recent” in Hildeh’s case and Galleh’s, at least, being a number that stretched back quite some time — and the bureaucracy that funded their employment did not seem inclined to send them any more help.
This particular son — whose name, like easily half of his brothers, was Eranodi, after Eroni, the first Emperor — was glad for the overwork and the subsequent distraction, because it gave him a freedom he was fairly certain young Emperor’s-sons were not supposed to have.
read on…
After (Before) The Empire Falls, the Emperor Stands.
👑
The young son-of-the-Emperor (they were all sons of the Emperor, although their fathers were all several years dead) waited until two of his cousins were making an appropriate fuss and two more seemed to have decided to climb the bookshelves all the way to the top.
There were seven nursemaids for the lot of them, but, from the things the nurses said when they thought their young charges weren’t listening, there were more of them, the sons, then there had been in recent memory — “recent” in Hildeh’s case and Galleh’s, at least, being a number that stretched back quite some time — and the bureaucracy that funded their employment did not seem inclined to send them any more help.
This particular son — whose name, like easily half of his brothers, was Eranodi, after Eroni, the first Emperor — was glad for the overwork and the subsequent distraction, because it gave him a freedom he was fairly certain young Emperor’s-sons were not supposed to have.
read on…
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Date: 2017-09-12 07:54 pm (UTC)<fails utterly>
SQUEEEEEEEE!
... but, you realize, where the first piece could stand as a vignette, this is decidedly a beginning, complete with cliffhanger. (Though quite plausibly he can just hand the message off at the throne room door.)
Nits:
"and his two younger mother’s-son brother": pluralize brother, given two?
"hurried our as if he was on an errand": "our" -> off, maybe?
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Date: 2017-09-13 12:48 pm (UTC)And all because I was watching Rick & Morty and got hung up on the all-the-Morties episode idea.
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Date: 2017-09-28 01:24 am (UTC)I wonder what happens to them. Are they killed or put elsewhere without given the chance to become Emperor? Maybe some of them become pages...