A New World: The Letter
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The potion was sweeter than she remembered it, and for a moment, Kael worried that she’d made a mistake with an ingredient. Impossible. It might have been a thousand years, but to her mind, it had been barely more than a nap. She could no more have forgotten the ingredients than she could have forgotten her own name.
Her eyes cleared and she went for the note, glad she’d thought to put it away before the tourists showed up.
The letters shimmered and twisted until they were legible and understandable.
read on…
Previous: Myths
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The potion was sweeter than she remembered it, and for a moment, Kael worried that she’d made a mistake with an ingredient. Impossible. It might have been a thousand years, but to her mind, it had been barely more than a nap. She could no more have forgotten the ingredients than she could have forgotten her own name.
Her eyes cleared and she went for the note, glad she’d thought to put it away before the tourists showed up.
The letters shimmered and twisted until they were legible and understandable.
read on…
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Date: 2017-10-25 06:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2017-10-30 05:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2017-10-31 07:02 am (UTC)Nit: She blinked twice, and realized she was blinking away tears. "Joaon… oh, Joaon." should be outdented, not being part of the doubled translation.
Fascinating (and useful, but possibly overwhelming) variation on the potion she wound up with.
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Date: 2017-10-31 11:03 pm (UTC)