The Hidden Mall: Normal ⛲
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Abby and skinny-Liv slept in beds bracketing Liv-1, who had been tied down probably more thoroughly than she needed to be. Abby had thought she’d have trouble falling asleep – a strange bed, a strange world, and with no idea what might be out there – but she was asleep almost before her head hit the pillow.
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Previous: The Hidden Mall: Ropes & Vines
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Abby and skinny-Liv slept in beds bracketing Liv-1, who had been tied down probably more thoroughly than she needed to be. Abby had thought she’d have trouble falling asleep – a strange bed, a strange world, and with no idea what might be out there – but she was asleep almost before her head hit the pillow.
read on…
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Date: 2018-01-13 10:33 pm (UTC)I've noticed that skinnier Liv, ragged Liv, seems to have her head on her shoulders in ways that not-raggedy Liv doesn't. I don't know if that's the effects of the candy on not-raggedy Liv, or what, but it's interesting! And I'd really like to meet that, to quote alt!Vic Carter, weird Sandy-Sandy pair somewhere.
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Date: 2018-01-13 11:03 pm (UTC)That’s not a bad idea, using the key. Wonder why Abby hasn’t thought of it yet?
Also thanks for the reminder on that weird Sandy-Sandy pair.
(I picture Sandy sort of like Marcie from Peanuts)
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Date: 2018-01-14 12:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-01-26 05:23 am (UTC)I see Liv-1 hasn't run off, and — hope of hopes! — might be seeing the candy wear off some. That statement "It doesn’t have to all be on you." has me wondering: should Abby have taken her up on that? It might've given Liv-1 a better sense of responsibility. Or the candy might've kicked in and she'd've charged directly into the vines.
Wasn't there an agreement that if one said scram, everyone scrammed? Here's hoping that there's some scramming that happens right quick.