Beauty-Beast 29: Bad Change
Jan. 26th, 2018 07:59 pmFirst: M/m Keeper/Kept
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“He has something down in the basement of the building.” Sal’s voice sounded tight when Ctirad came to himself. “Here, kid— Ctirad — drink some more water. It’s not a creature, it’s some sort of really Bad Change, from what I can tell.”
“Bad Cha
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“He has something down in the basement of the building.” Sal’s voice sounded tight when Ctirad came to himself. “Here, kid— Ctirad — drink some more water. It’s not a creature, it’s some sort of really Bad Change, from what I can tell.”
“Bad Cha
read on…
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Date: 2018-01-28 02:01 am (UTC)Also, I think he'd like to be paddled a bit ;)
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Date: 2018-01-28 03:21 am (UTC)• Timaois’ despair
-> Timaios’
> This typo keeps appearing. It might help you to pronounce the name to yourself as you type it: tim-EYE-os. At least, that's how I pronounce it, partly because it looks like Greek to me, and when I say that, I mean it literally.
• BEsides
-> Besides
• wh8ile
-> while
• ERmenrich
-> Ermenrich
• You have you duties
-> your
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Date: 2018-02-01 06:28 am (UTC)Ctirad has surprised himself, and me too, with how he was talking before they headed for bed. It's a quite formal style that I mostly see in translation, or as a speech pattern of a wildly different culture (e.g. the Khajiit in the Elder Scrolls games), rather than directly in English.
I still like seeing the changing dynamics between Ctirad and Timaios, particularly with Sal involved. I think Sal may help Ctirad relax. Perhaps Ctirad is coming out of that extremely fragile state? He still has a long way to go, though.
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Date: 2018-03-06 06:00 pm (UTC)Sal and the other staff are very helpful, ‘cause they’re cuing Ctirad on how the boss likes to be treated by his staff.