The Place of Waiting
Apr. 14th, 2018 03:49 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
aldersprigWritten from a dream, although I changed some things for narrative purposes.
They stored dead superheros here, although the only part of that sentence that was remotely accurate was “here”.
They sat or perched or lounged or lay, lined up on the wall/floor like chess pieces, their uniforms relics of bygone eras or echos of times that may have never been.
Some had been super, or would be. Some had been or might be heroes, or at least called that.
read on…
They stored dead superheros here, although the only part of that sentence that was remotely accurate was “here”.
They sat or perched or lounged or lay, lined up on the wall/floor like chess pieces, their uniforms relics of bygone eras or echos of times that may have never been.
Some had been super, or would be. Some had been or might be heroes, or at least called that.
read on…
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Date: 2018-05-08 12:32 pm (UTC)I'm not sure whether this is creepy or nifty, but I'm sure leaning toward creepy.
I like how you leave it unclear why she made the trip in, while making it pretty clear she got back out. Nice vignette!
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Date: 2018-05-08 01:04 pm (UTC)