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Okay, this has been bugging me for a bit.  Leander sort of magically gets collared on the drive.  Oops!

So here's his collaring scene.  This happens in the middle-beginning of Chapter Five. 

🔐

Mr. MacDiarmad led him out of the garage and through a long hallway that seemed to be there for the sole purpose of being a hallway.  That led out into a wide living room - leather and brown-tones, wood and wide windows opening on a generously large yard.  

“First things first.  If you would kneel?”

read on…

Date: 2018-05-20 03:07 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thnidu
Odd.


• It had to be a trap.  but on the other hand
→ a trap. But


Date: 2018-05-20 06:42 am (UTC)
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Every time I see the name of this chapter, I can't help thinking of collard greens.

Date: 2018-05-26 04:32 am (UTC)
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Hrm. I've had a feeling like that with a new glasses prescription, until I get adjusted. "Wait, nothing's quite where it should be!" I expect this is rather more encompassing.

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