Mermay: The Date
Jun. 8th, 2018 12:40 pmPercival looked at the clock. The day was right; the calculation was right; the ball was the perfect setting.
It had taken a little doing. Yes, the Club had a ball like this once per year. Yes, they held it in this place, the Grand Promenade, as it was called, right on the water. These thi
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It had taken a little doing. Yes, the Club had a ball like this once per year. Yes, they held it in this place, the Grand Promenade, as it was called, right on the water. These thi
read on…
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Date: 2018-06-12 07:59 am (UTC)Really, Percival, did you not think this through at all ...?
Nits: "Oh, don’t trust that cake, m’lord.": cake -> clock
"The waiter passing by pressed a glass of sherry into ...": Either add "and" before "pressed", or put commas before and after "passing by"
"It’s always gone two minutes slow": Given the context, I think the clock is fast rather than slow?
"And from behind the had of her dance partner?": had -> head
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Date: 2018-07-11 10:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-07-17 01:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-06-12 01:50 pm (UTC)Depending on the nature of these Creatures — and right now they're looking like something out of either Lovecraft or bad anime — they may be indiscriminate, or they may target the Important Person in the room. Percival, you presumably know more about these than we do. Did you just make your sister a target?
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Date: 2018-06-22 12:53 am (UTC)