Kaijune: Little Monsters
Jun. 22nd, 2018 02:03 amWritten in the setting/time of my 101 Apoc Nights story.
They had been passing bathtub hooch for hours and the fire had burned down to coals, on which they were roasting whatever they still have to roast. And then one old woman, her hair white and her skin a maze of wrinkles, set down her
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They had been passing bathtub hooch for hours and the fire had burned down to coals, on which they were roasting whatever they still have to roast. And then one old woman, her hair white and her skin a maze of wrinkles, set down her
read on…
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Date: 2018-06-22 03:05 am (UTC)But where do they store all that acid breath? Or is it one blast per tiny lizard and then a loooooong recharging period (if they survive)?
Nit: "in the center of this down, one lizard" down -> town, I think.
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Date: 2018-07-03 08:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-07-04 02:49 am (UTC)What do they fire the big cannon for? Can they control how big a burst they use? Do they use it as a self-defense mechanism? Do they use it for hunting? Do they *have* to fire it once they build up too much acid, and someone grabbing (or even startling) them if they're full-ish sets it off regardless? It's a crossbred magical add-on, it may not be well-integrated with the rest of their patterns ...
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Date: 2018-07-10 01:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-07-11 08:11 am (UTC)OTOH, this is a story in a story, and may not reflect the truth on the ground in-'verse.
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Date: 2018-07-10 01:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-06-23 05:14 am (UTC)I suspect the big breath in the bitty lizard is the after-effects of fae godling magic.
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Date: 2018-07-10 01:06 pm (UTC)And I really like the 101 concept. I look forward to finishing it some day.
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Date: 2018-07-11 08:39 am (UTC)