Consequences, a story of Addergoole Year Nine/Ceinwen for @cluudle

[aldersprig]

After Three-Way, the Duet.
3-Way originally posted here and on LJ,
continued here (LJ)
and then here (LJ
and then
Here (Duet) and Here on LJ
And the "Preferences" (LJ) and
"9 Things I Hate About You" (LJ)

For cluudle, for being awesome.

Content warning: this relationship borders on emotionally abusive.



Thorburn released Ceinwen slowly from the hug. It seemed as if he'd been holding her forever, since he'd agreed that now was not the time to talk about the elephant in the living room, since he'd said they had room for negotiation. She'd thought he'd forgotten. She wasn't quite sure he hadn't fallen asleep; she wasn't sure she hadn't, either. It had been a long day, and it was late.

"You were right. I said you could earn your clothes back, your things. And I never told you how. I admit, I didn't think about how much." He stroked her arm. "I like the things I put you in. And I like you naked next to me."

She wasn't sure if now was still the time for talking, but she tried. "I wouldn't mind, if it didn't feel so demeaning." Like she wasn't a person enough to get clothes.

He nodded slowly. "If I don't wear anything to bed..." He stopped what he was going to say, but she could see the shadows around him. "then you will be getting more waking up in the middle of the night than I think you'd prefer. Boxers and panties?"

"Am I getting a say?"

"I do want you to be happy. And I'd say for helping Basalt out, you deserve a reward, wouldn't you?"

"I..." She twisted her lips. "'Good girl, have a gold star?'"

He frowned at her. "You're not a child, Ceinwen, but you are Mine, and that does mean I get to reward and punish you as I choose. I'd rather work out rewards, give you things for pleasing me. Would you prefer I punish you when you irritate me?"

"The way it seems lately, you'd be punishing me all the time and never rewarding me anyway," she muttered. She had just a second to realize she'd pushed him too far before he picked her up and bent her over his lap, her wrists pinned at the small of her back. He pulled her skirt up - always skirts, he'd taken all her pants - and his hand came down hard on her ass, one cheek and then the other.

She yelped at the first hit, struggling against his hands, and then whimpered at the second. After that, she froze, hoping he'd stop. She could feel his erection against her stomach and ribs, which made the whole thing more humiliating, more terrifying, more arousing.

He leaned down until his lips were near her ears. "I'd like doing that every time you mouthed off," he whispered. "But I don't think you would. So I'll reward you, and I'll tell you what will earn rewards. And maybe, sometimes, then, I can just spank you for fun."

Comments

[inventrix]

I don't like you, Thorburn. >(

[aldersprig]

No?

[(Anonymous)]

It's sorta my fault, I specifically requested them in a battle of wills and he is a big cheaterpants.

[inventrix]

He's a cheater AND a JERK.

*grumbles*

[(Anonymous)]

PS. Wystie always forgets she doesn't have a DW account. (She claims the above comment as her oooown.)

[lilfluff]

No getting around it, Thorburn is a jerk to put it mildly. Don't complain someone hasn't done anything to earn a reward if you've never told them what they might do to earn it. The only time the stick works without the carrot is if your goal is to break the subject. Okay, so he has the excuse of being a teen who has likely never been given any decent advice on how to handle this situation. But that simply elevates him slightly to ignorant jerk, but still a jerk.

(Three paragraphs of ranting at Regine's blinkered optimism about how adolescents will handle things cut to save everyone :p)

[aldersprig]

Well, yes.

But if he were a saint it would be a very boring story.

[clare_dragonfly]

...well, I liked it and thought it was fairly reasonable of Thorburn :-P He did offer to wear boxers to bed! Also, spanking. Hot.

[aldersprig]

*grin* I was hoping you'd show up, since you keep cheering on their dynamic.

[clare_dragonfly]

I love it! Because Thorburn has good intentions (mostly) but he's so messed up he doesn't know what's good, and doesn't understand that it's okay to treat your Kept like a person capable of making her own decisions; and Ceinwen is scared and Kept and stuff, but she can fight back against his control in her own little ways, and they're, like, saving each other and all. ::is eloquent::

[aldersprig]

*grin* Thank you... yes, that's EXACTLY what I'm going for. *purr*

[clare_dragonfly]

Yay, I interpret well! :D

[aldersprig]

:-D