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Content warning: this creeped me out writing it, a little bit.

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Day 8 of 30 days of Fiction: "8) Write a scene as a cat"









I wake up when the bright warmth moves off of me, roll over, lick my belly a few times, and move into the bright warmth again, one arm over my face.

For a moment, in the sleepy place that isn't quite awareness, everything feels strange and wrong. I know that the tail lashing just out of the light should not be there. I know that the fingers on my hand, that the claws on my paw... that they are wrong. Short and stubby and sharp. I know that I used to be different.

Then the warmth urges me back into sleep. I sleep a lot more, now. It gets harder and harder to hold thoughts in my mind for any length of ... oh, a dust mote. My eyes open wide and I bat at the ghost swirling in the brightness. It's taunting me, slipping through my claws like it's not there. But I can feel it, just at the edges... there! I pounce it to the ground, pin in there, one claw through a gossamer wing.

I swallow it in three quick gulps, leaving a tiny foot to remind myself. While its thin non-substance is in me, I can think. I can focus again. I sit upright, cross-legged - the master stopped observing me regularly weeks ago - and focus.

I can't read anymore. My eyes can't track the characters, and whatever he did to my brain makes focusing that fine impossible. The lack of thumbs makes writing nearly impossible, even if I could see the letters. Even if I had paper and pencil. Nor can I speak. But I can, for a few minutes a day, remember. Remember what it's like to be human.

The thought escapes me again, and I lick my chops, nose at the tiny foot bone, and make my way down to the sandbox.

Date: 2011-06-13 03:44 am (UTC)
outlineofash: Close-up of a black cat with bright yellow eyes. (Sundry - Black Cat)
From: [personal profile] outlineofash
Super creepy and well-written. And also creepy.

Date: 2011-06-14 01:25 am (UTC)
clare_dragonfly: Reid standing with his hands together, text: the profile suggests that the UNSUB is an itsy bitsy spider. (CM: Reid: itsy bitsy spider)
From: [personal profile] clare_dragonfly
Interesting. I, oddly enough, didn't find this very creepy XD Is this the same girl who got kind of turned partly into a cat in another story? I think it was a Cali setting?

Date: 2011-06-14 01:40 am (UTC)
clare_dragonfly: Reid standing with his hands together, text: the profile suggests that the UNSUB is an itsy bitsy spider. (CM: Reid: itsy bitsy spider)
From: [personal profile] clare_dragonfly
Reid is the best and so is this icon! ♥ It cracks me up whenever I actually think about it (as opposed to just glancing past it). Someday I want to write a fic in which the unsub actually is a spider.

Date: 2011-06-14 02:11 am (UTC)
clare_dragonfly: woman with green feathery wings, text: stories last longer: but only by becoming only stories (Default)
From: [personal profile] clare_dragonfly
I actually hadn't thought of spider-shifter! Either way would be fun...

Date: 2011-06-23 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] amanda_sheree
Creepiness! I wonder who and what the "master" is.

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