I am going to, for nano, rewrite Addergoole Book One.
Yeah. That. Re-write, from scratch, keeping just the framework.
I want to have a coherent outline going in.
How you can help: Noteworthy moments from the original that you would like to hold on to, fond moments, anything you think should go into the outline.
Thanks!
Yeah. That. Re-write, from scratch, keeping just the framework.
I want to have a coherent outline going in.
How you can help: Noteworthy moments from the original that you would like to hold on to, fond moments, anything you think should go into the outline.
Thanks!
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Date: 2013-09-03 04:49 pm (UTC)But I still really like that bit :D
It would also be great if you could make it a little clearer that Kailani does Change (IIRC, she did during the year but didn't notice it?) so we're not always waiting for it to happen.
Can't think of anything else specific, but I'm definitely looking forward to reading the new version.
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Date: 2013-09-03 04:53 pm (UTC)Kai Changed before the year ever started - but yeah, that should show up at some point.
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Date: 2013-09-03 05:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-03 05:58 pm (UTC)