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This ficlet was written after looking at this sketch by [livejournal.com profile] silvertales, with their permission. He looked like someone out of a sub-line of a bloodline of Addergoole (Although the horns had to have come from his mother's side of the family...), so I asked @Kissofjudas to name him, since ri's named most of Astarot's line.

This was actually an experiment in how much I could write the mood without revealing the plot.


"No."

Mormo was unimpressed.

"Yes."

To be fair, everyone in the room was unimpressed.

"I said no, damnit." Mormo glared across the room. One hoof scuffed the floor, and the tracework of lights that was part of his Change lit up his forehead and cheeks. "This is my last year of school. There's no way."

"It has to be done." Now it had turned into a three-way argument. Tempers were only going to get hotter. I stayed in a corner, watched the three of them, and said nothing at all. This might be about me, but it didn't involve me.

The glow from Mormo's forehead was threatening to blind the rest of the room. "There is no way. No way that you are going to talk me into that. And especially not with her."

"Nobody is asking your opinion on the matter. We're telling you how things are going down."

I wanted to say something. I really did. Her? Like I was some sort of non-entity?

But they had pushed Mormo too far, and that was about when everything exploded.



Date: 2014-01-22 03:56 pm (UTC)
kay_brooke: Snowy landscape with a fence, an evergreen forest, and a pink sky (winter)
From: [personal profile] kay_brooke
Wow, so many possibilities for what this could be about! I mean, assuming everyone survives the explosion.

Date: 2014-01-24 11:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] natf
I think that either DW has a bug or you have a bug in the links to silvertales-art LJ and LJ-profile in this post (and in the crosspost to LJ at http://aldersprig-dw.livejournal.com/225587.html ). They both seem to start with "www.www.livejournal…" and so they throw up errors.

Now watch this comment get tagged as spam due to links.

Also commenting at LJ.
Edited Date: 2014-01-24 11:21 pm (UTC)

Date: 2014-01-31 11:36 am (UTC)
jjhunter: Drawing of human J.J. in red and brown inks with steampunk goggle glasses (red J.J. inked)
From: [personal profile] jjhunter
Oh, there are some nice details here — the weaving in of body cues (hoof scrapping, glow), the way the ending is deliciously ambiguous in whether it is metaphorical or literal, the sharp unexpected keen of insight as the POV person emerges
This might be about me, but it didn't involve me
and the sense of dense-packed context behind this.

Well done.

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